Tuesday, 16 June 2015 | By: SMK SHAHBANDARAYA

Short Film : I Just Want To Live


8 comments:

Ahmad Eyeman said...
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Ahmad Eyeman said...

Let's see. It's pretty good. The plot is nice. However there are still some stuff that...not nice.

1. It looks like they're acting.(At least, try to act real as possible and make eye contact to make the scenes more realistic)

2. Make eye contact.

3. Try to remove the background noise. (I suggest use Adobe After Effects CS6)

4. The 'hitting' scene were they argue over deliver boy, they should slap.


NOTE : Probably I'll make a video of this. But, be patient. Maybe next year you watch it. Just check it monthly on my Youtube channel, TheEyeman. Bye.

SMK SHAHBANDARAYA said...

wow..you seem like a really good filmmaker...where can i watch your shortfilm/movie etc?

amirul ashraf said...

Wow really great.our seniors are really talented.Sugoi!! (Sugoi means amazing in Japanese)

Ahmad Eyeman said...

Not really a good filmmaker.... YET! I am still a rookie. But I will notify you guys If I had a video that I think is awesome. I would love to do a video about drugs.

Ahmad Aiman said...

Wow! Nice video! Although at some point maybe I agree with Ahmad Eyeman..... No offense.
I mean your video is really great!

Pusat Sumber SMK Shahbandaraya said...

Nais gaissss :D kipidap

Pusat Sumber SMK Shahbandaraya said...

Nais gaissss :D kipidap

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